Cosmos and us

I haven’t seen night

look so beautiful.

Since you are with me.

You are all those stars

and I am like sky

sharing space with you.

I feel alive!

You burn so far away

and I wait for you to

pierce my darkness with your light.

And as we lay here,

watching the night.

Holding hands of time,

I am more than me

and you are more than

life…!!

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19 thoughts on “Cosmos and us

  1. Nice one!

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    1. anovicescribe Oct 20, 2018 — 5:40 pm

      Thank you!! πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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    1. anovicescribe Oct 20, 2018 — 8:17 pm

      Thank you πŸ™‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  2. Good to see a new genre waking up in you…looks like you have found, what you were in search of…Great work Kartik

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    1. anovicescribe Oct 20, 2018 — 8:21 pm

      Haha, learning Anamika!! A novice scribe, I am! πŸ˜‰ and thank you very much!! πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ™Œ

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      1. anovicescribe Oct 20, 2018 — 8:24 pm

        If you would read Roadside poem on the blog, you will find a different genre. I write about almost everything πŸ˜πŸ˜›

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      2. A novice scribe you say ……but i see a fragrance spreading Bloom in you….

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    2. anovicescribe Oct 20, 2018 — 8:43 pm

      Haha, well time has a peculiar way of doing things. And my time is taking shape right now to blossom and to bloom to become a fruit and not stay flower …πŸ˜…

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      1. Haha…go on enjoy these times and give us such beautiful insights too …

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      2. anovicescribe Oct 20, 2018 — 9:13 pm

        I am obliged to 😊😊

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  3. Thesis incredibly romantic. It… stirs within me.

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    1. anovicescribe Oct 21, 2018 — 8:30 am

      Hey thank 😊😊

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      1. I’m glad this popped up again on my feed. I’m going to schedule it for a reblog on my blog ::)))

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  4. Wonderfully romantic!

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    1. anovicescribe Nov 2, 2018 — 11:23 pm

      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  5. β€œYou are more than life!” I ❀️ this!

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    1. anovicescribe Nov 25, 2018 — 6:36 pm

      I also love this πŸ˜‰πŸ™ŒπŸ˜Š hope the person I wrote for loves it too!! πŸ˜…

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  6. Lovely! β€οΈπŸ¦‹πŸŒ€

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