Whirlpool whispers !

I swim in the ocean of life

as billion others do in their life

Swimming ! Swimming! Swimming!

by passing the struggles that are threatening

and moving forward with small goals that are spinning

At times unknowingly,all of a sudden

I get to drown in the whirlpool of my thoughts ridden

Sucked in the dark,making my reality hidden

Deep inside the pool,whispers the voice

“Why do you eat?

Why do you earn?

Why do you set goals?

Why do you love?

Why do you achieve?

Why do you live?

What is your purpose?

Ample number of questions as such with what, how and why.

For whatever you thrive and dive

Nothing is going to be with you forever in this life

Anything in life just flow with time

Either victory or failure just blow with time

Neither Alexander nor Cholan just spared by time

So,life will just flow and blow…life will just flow and blow….

Suddenly gaining conscious,trying hard to breath furious

Somehow being back to ocean of life,I tend to think about those whispers with curiouse

But scared that it may conquer my mind

leaving me low-spiritted with aimless bind

that might make me say “life will just flow and blow…life will just flow and blow so just live with the flow aimlessly”

As curiouse as a toddler At the same time as puzzled as a teenager, struggling to go in deep and explore my whirlpool whispers

But unknowingly often, I get drowned and sucked in the whirpool that whispers.


9 thoughts on “Whirlpool whispers !

  1. Wow! So beautiful… yes over a period of time we do get stuck into life’s many whirlpools.

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    1. Yes…Thanks for ur understanding and sharing ur words 😃
      Have a good day !!

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      1. Always friend…thanks for the wishes.. .you too have a great day.

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  2. anovicescribe Dec 3, 2018 — 11:26

    This is amazing. the day to day struggle to finding our place, and still moving on, letting go. Beautifully written. 🙂 🙂

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    1. Yes,Life just moves on….Thanks for sharing your view😊😊
      Have a good day

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      1. anovicescribe Dec 3, 2018 — 15:14

        wish the same for you. 🙂

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    1. Glad that you had a nice time reading this post
      Thank you😃😃
      Have a good day

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